Whiskey can make your whole mouth numb
lips and all, if you drink it slow enough
a molecular branding, every cell
reddening, softly, hissing
Weed can come like a crown
warm and tingling on your temples
prince of forgetting, of touching
close your red heavy eyes,
cast them off like useless gems
put everything but my fingertips in exile
Sunday, November 20, 2011
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Something about this whole poem is strange to me in some way. Everything seems to not quite match, I am thinking "lips and all;" "molecular branding;" "reddening...hissing;" but especially "useless gems." I am curious what's in the space between those words, why is that tension there? I want to know why the fingertips get to stay but everything else must go...
ReplyDeleteSo many questions...